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In 2010, over 50navies and civilians were died in Korea by shelling on Yeonpyeong island and torpedo attacking on the South Korean Navy ship Cheonan. Besides three cars and dozens of houses were destroyed and forest fire was occurred. And all these accidents were happened by provoking of North Korea. These are same as terrorisms to South Korea. After the Korean War, it was the first time that civilians were died by North Korea. Because of these accidents,

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It shows that the possibility of the crime by people from North will increase. And not only people in Korea, but also foreigners will know about these dangers. So, no people will travel to Korea, and investments of foreign investors will decrease. Like this, if Korea will be recognized as a dangerous country to the whole world, it will cause a big problem on the Korean economic development.

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