성범죄 감소 방법에 대한 영어 에세이 (how to reduce crime rates)

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저는 통번역 대학원에 재학중입니다.
성 범죄를 어떻게 하면 줄일 수 있을지에 관한 영어 에세이입니다.
주석까지 완벽하게 달려 있고, 내용도 알차다고 자부합니다.
글자수는 836자이구요, A4 3장짜리 에세이입니다.

많은 도움 되시길 바랍니다.

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The number of sexual assaults and murders against children sharply increased in recent years. For example, the number of sexual abuse under the age of 20 has increased from 3784 in 2005 to 5460 in 2007 . In this regard, we have to enact well-intended, strong countermeasures to prevent further victims. I argue three methods to reduce those crimes. First, we have to reinforce punishments on sexual offenders. Second, we should allow the public to access the information about sexual predators, and third, we should introduce electronic tagging and rehabilitation system to reduce recidivism rates.
In South Korea, punishments upon sexual perpetrators tend to be too lenient. Statistics of the past four years show that among 9031 cases of sexual abuse and crimes against children, only 20.7 percent of criminals were kept behind the bars. About 40 percent of them were fined, and 39.2 percent of them ended up with probation. In other words, around 80 percent of criminals were fled by the blunt judicial system. Furthermore, South Korea has little records of sentence to imprisonment of over 10 years for sex offenders

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